From e7dcf3086482a31f8d0323466520d97cc3f8408f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: chn <chn@chn.moe>
Date: Sat, 5 Jul 2025 14:28:12 +0800
Subject: [PATCH]

---
 paper/result/perfect/non-polar/default.typ | 15 ++++++++-------
 paper/todo.typ                             |  4 ++--
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/paper/result/perfect/non-polar/default.typ b/paper/result/perfect/non-polar/default.typ
index bd8167a..71cd10f 100644
--- a/paper/result/perfect/non-polar/default.typ
+++ b/paper/result/perfect/non-polar/default.typ
@@ -23,15 +23,16 @@ The form of the Raman tensors (i.e., which components are non-zero) could be det
 The 18 negligible-polar phonons at the #sym.Gamma point
   correspond to twelve irreducible representations of the C#sub[6v] point group
   (2A#sub[1] + 4B#sub[1] + 2E#sub[1] + 4E#sub[2]).
-By further considering the doubly degenerate modes of the C#sub[6v] (E#sub[1] and E#sub[2])
+By further decomposing the doubly degenerate modes (E#sub[1] and E#sub[2] of C#sub[6v] group)
     in the C#sub[2v] point group,
-  the form of the 18 negligible-polar phonons' Raman tensors can be determined, as shown in @table-rep.
-Phonons of the B#sub[1] representation in C#sub[6v] have a zero Raman tensor and do not contribute to Raman scattering,
+  the form of the 18 negligible-polar phonons' Raman tensors can be determined, as summarized in @table-rep.
+Phonons of the B#sub[1] representation in C#sub[6v] possess zero Raman tensors
+    and thus do not contribute to Raman scattering,
   while other phonons have non-zero Raman tensor components,
-  indicating they may be observable in Raman experiments under appropriate incidence and polarization configurations.
-However, whether a mode is sufficiently strong to be experimentally visible
-    depends on the magnitudes of its Raman tensor components,
-  which cannot be determined solely from symmetry analysis.
+  making them potentially observable in Raman experiments under appropriate incidence and polarization configurations.
+It should be noted, however, that the observability in Raman experiment depends not only on the tensor form,
+  but also on the magnitude of its Raman tensor components,
+  which cannot be inferred from symmetry considerations alone.
 
 #include "table-rep.typ"
 
diff --git a/paper/todo.typ b/paper/todo.typ
index 39c245c..32ade28 100644
--- a/paper/todo.typ
+++ b/paper/todo.typ
@@ -49,10 +49,10 @@
           - [x] 中文
           - [x] 英文
           - [x] 调整语言
-        - [/] 表示
+        - [x] 表示
           - [x] 中文
           - [x] 英文
-          - [ ] 调整语言
+          - [x] 调整语言
         - [ ] 估算拉曼张量
           - [ ] 中文
           - [ ] 英文